Category: Writers Block
when no one will listen and you feel
so low tierd and alone
when all you want to do is scream
to hide from the world and all that it brings
the hurt the pain the tears
when you think you are beating and you dont want to go on
there is no point to it all
when u feel no one will listen
who cares that your hurting
who’s been through the hurt
that you have been
do you tell the world or hold it all inside
ware a mask and hide
aint it safer that way
you tell yourself
but remember someone somewhere
does care that you are
there you are a blessing to them
a person they need in there life
so dont you give up cause ive been there
you got to keep fighting the hurt
over the years it will get easyer you will never for get
but you say hay least i made it here
so fight with your heart and fight with your soul
cause someone somewhere will listen
because they have been there
dont ever give up
This is good. Thanks for posting it. It would be good for all of us to remember the truths in this poem.
you are welcome.
wellcome to my world
Good job.
…there is something to be said though ‘tis been said before…that until a person’s fight begins within themselves they aren’t worth very much… Yes, fight with your heart…with your soul… and realizing that oft times it is the mask that we wear that somehow gives at times the courage to simply go on in the midst of the storm…for at times the mask becomes in a manner of speaking, that umbrella of protection that shields against the darts, like hard pitting golf ball sized grains of pelting hail that would seek to rip us to shreds and pierce us through and through.
Oh, thanks so much for putting my thoughts into words. But you said it so much better than I ever could!
you are welcome all.
i like it myself also
I love the defiance and determination in the face of such odds. Excellent!
I really like it!